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=Commodore-Jinx May 9, 2009, 4:40:56 PM
I think you did a good job on this, and I like the idea.

but a few things bother me..

• the blood looks too.. un-blood like. it kinda just looks like red strings to me. maybe next time you draw blood, you should try to make it look a little more "oozey" and kinda like it's 'dripping'

• there doesn't seem to be enough shading on the socks/leggings. they just seem a little bare. maybe you should add some folds or something?

• her head looks weird. it just doesn't... correspond with how her eyes are. either that, or her head is kind of misshapen or un-proportional to her body. also, her hand looks a little to big.

other than that, nice job. :) keep working at it, and keep practicing!
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=Mafiee May 9, 2009, 5:44:21 PM
Actually the blood is red strings. "Fate strings" moste likely. :D

I know the eyes a freaky, it was meant to be more maniac like.



thank you so much for the critique :D i really loved it. I know now what to improve on :D

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